A gentle reminder ...

The goal of this blog initially was for Mr. Mc to show his students and friends what he doing while in Pennsylvania and DC in 2011. Now it's being used as a place for him, travelling colleagues and former students to discuss edumacation and history related "stuff" as well as ... well, anything which pops into his head. Mr. Mc would never knowingly embarrass either the school he loves or the family he is devoted to. By joining in the discussion, he expects the same of you.

Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts

Friday, September 13, 2013

The Mayflower Haiku?


One of the most challenging parts of teaching research are texts above a student's current reading level. The textbook our eighth grade students read has a lexile level near what the average sophomore or junior can read and understand. So far, we've been wrestling with annotation and most students are becoming adept at finding the topic and its supporting facts in each paragraph. Its a skill they will hone over the next several few weeks as we begin our first research project and continue history onto the American Revolution.

One other way of reading texts is by looking at primary documents. This week we played around with the Mayflower Compact. There is a nice explanation of the document here.

We took the document in steps. Step one was to find the key words. Here is what we found:

Mayflower Compact
In the name of God, Amen. We whose names are underwritten, the loyal subjects of our dread sovereign lord King James, by the grace of God, of Great Britain, France, and Ireland King, Defender of the Faith, etc. Having undertaken, for the glory of God, and advancement of the Christian faith, and honor of our king and country, a voyage to plant the first colony in the northern parts of Virginia, do by these presents solemnly and mutually in the presence of God and one of another, covenant, and combine ourselves together into a civil body politic, for our better ordering and preservation, and furtherance of the ends aforesaid; and by virtue hereof to enact, constitute, and frame such just and equal laws, ordinances, acts, constitutions, offices from time to time, as shall be thought most meet and convenient for the general good of the colony: unto which we promise all due submission and obedience. In witness whereof we have hereunder subscribed our names; Cape Cod, the 11th of November, in the year of the reign of our sovereign lord King James, of England, France and Ireland eighteenth and of Scotland fifty-fourth, Anno Domini 1620.

Step two asks us to take those words and sum up the document:

Christian colonists, signed below, on their way to Virginia, in serious attitude, promise to make and submit to decisions, both spoken and written, that will help keep the individual safe as well as for the good of the colony.

This is the summary 13- and 14-year olds came up with from their reflection on a document 400+ years old!!!

The third step asks them to make this their own by putting it in their own words. Ultimately, they may not use any of the words in the document (I let them fudge on the first one). After a few mistarts, I have found the best way to do this is to have them write a haiku or tweet of the document. If you can sum something in 140 characters and 17 syllables, you have a good scald on its understanding. Here is a sample of what they came up with:


civil body politic
is very interesting
and important


mayflower compact
the first new world document
makes life fair and equal


The mayflower compact shows equal laws and general good of colony #mayflowercompact

#mayflowercompact is a document that states people need to be treated = and laws are for =. we make up one civil body politic


voyage to 'ginia
coming into civil body politic
equal laws for general good


The Mayflower Compact is a document about the government and how we must submit to be acommunity. Sometimes we don't like it but its ok, we are a unit.


we Christian British
will survive with freedom in
our new colony


we make a voyage
plan to start a colony
promise to succeed


voyage in the colony
equal laws 'r important
submission 'n obedience

Yes, I know that they are using the words from the original and, yes, I know that they are killing the haiku meter and ...  but--when people ask me why I teach this age group its the moments in my class today they learned and understood. Its like catching lightning in a bottle...

Monday, February 4, 2013

King's Speech ... part three

This is the third in a four part post on work my students have been doing on Dr. King's I Have a Dream Speech. We discussed the Modern Civil Rights Movement from Black Codes to Booker T. Washington and W.E.B. Dubois to Selma.

Word Cloud of King's I Have a Dream Speech

The first step was to identify Key Words from their particular cutting. The students then worked in groups each class period to determine the key words for their group. I then collected words which had been on at least two of the three group lists. Those words were:
  • Dignity
  • Satisfied
  • Justice
The students then were asked to summarize the speech using King's words.

The final task was crafting the speech in their own words. They were given the option to write a tweet, haiku or a 20-word notecard. This is what each group came up with:

Notecard
We must fight the fight to be discluded b/c of color of their skin. >>>>
Pplt ask us if we're happy. >>>>
We won't be :) until things are fair.

Tweet
Blacks :( havin' hard time, want freedom, whites^^ segregation 4 blacks has to go :) not equal, deserve legit unbiased life. #Free@Last

Haiku
We aren't going to hide
We will always with pride
Laws be justified

There were a couple individual ones which I thought were really cool too:

Tweet
We cannot let protest become physical violence. When we are asked, "When will you be happy?" We will never be happy until we have the same rights as the white man. #Free@Last

Tweet
While we try to stand alone, blacks are being treated terribly and we need to fight together for our rights and the for the kids. Everone deserves an equal chance. #Free@Last

The third cutting from the I Have a Dream speech:
I say to you today, my friends, so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream. I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal." I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood. I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice. I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character. I have a dream today. I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of interposition and nullification; one day right there in Alabama, little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers. I have a dream today.